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NitzanCK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 158 W: 27 N: 67] (882) [2006-02-18 10:43] [2] [+]

Don't use such a close aperture, it won't sharper!
I suggest you to use between f11-16. If you want the whole scene on focus, just "take the photo" from a propile.
The flash is too much dominant, it left behind a lot of scars.
Nice photo, keep sharing :o) .

NitzanCK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 158 W: 27 N: 67] (882) [2006-02-09 8:24]

Very good shot, Mike. I like the soft light and the "quiet" background.
DoF is a bit too small, the legs are out of focus but this is pettiness.
The photo is also too tight (especially at the top), let the bird breathe.

Excellent.

NitzanCK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 158 W: 27 N: 67] (882) [2006-02-04 10:40]

Rimantas,
The quality is very low; the sharpness is defective, there is a halo around the flower and the composition is wrong.
The colors are fine, did you crop this image?

You need a macro lens.

NitzanCK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 158 W: 27 N: 67] (882) [2005-12-15 12:20] [2] [+]

Nice, intresting moment.
DoF is too small, the upper head and legs are out of focus.
The photo is too tight, it needs more space at the top.
I really like the red beatle at the center.
The noise level is high, you can clean it with "Neat-Image" (a free software).

NitzanCK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 158 W: 27 N: 67] (882) [2005-11-18 10:04]

In my last criticism, I told "NINIX" (Hendrik Boot) that our nature is crowded - this is another photo that can prove it :).
The exposure is wrong, too many burnt spots.
The noise level is very high and the insects are'nt sharp enough.
f/5.6 is too wide & 1/125 sec is too low for macro shots, especially if you don't use tripod.
Nice composition and low angle. Thank you.

NitzanCK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 158 W: 27 N: 67] (882) [2005-11-17 13:01] [2] [+]

Nice shot Hendrik, nature is really crowded :o)
Some area is missing at the top of the image.
The photo is oversharpened, there is some halo around the insects\flower.
The photo is suffering - too much noise. But you are innocent, the camera is guilty.
Good DoF and PoV. Thank you.

NitzanCK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 158 W: 27 N: 67] (882) [2005-11-13 10:12]

Hi Greg,
The first one looks very intresting, can you show us\me a bigger virsion?
And yes, you must clean the glass :o).
Thank you.

NitzanCK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 158 W: 27 N: 67] (882) [2005-11-11 9:51] - [workshop] [compare]

Hi Greg, intresting creature.
I like the atmosphere and the light,
excellent sharpness and details.

Lovely, thank you.

NitzanCK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 158 W: 27 N: 67] (882) [2005-11-09 12:16]

Hi Reinier,
The situation seems to be spectacular - but the quality is horrible.
PoV and exposure are very good.

I would like to see a better virsion.

NitzanCK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 158 W: 27 N: 67] (882) [2005-11-09 11:49]

Hi Livio,
Intresting event, perfect sharpness and angle.

Thank you.